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		<title>Comment on That awkward form the novella by Th.</title>
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		<dc:creator>Th.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 May 2012 04:46:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>.

I would like to write more novellas. And I&#039;ve recently realized that ebooks mean I can.</description>
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<p>I would like to write more novellas. And I&#8217;ve recently realized that ebooks mean I can.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Aspiring authors: you can do this too by WHM</title>
		<link>http://williamhenrymorris.com/2012/aspiring-authors-you-can-do-this-too/#comment-240</link>
		<dc:creator>WHM</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 01 May 2012 21:30:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>When I say ideas, I may or may not mean fully formed story ideas. I count a snippet of a situation, or an image, or a vague memory as an idea. Often ideas will get combined (this happened with the last story I finished and submitted). 

And yes, I do need to generate more because I&#039;m focused on the flash fiction to novella range. If you look at my writing goal for this year, which is 50k words, that&#039;s going to likely end up being 2-3 novellettes, 3-4 flash fiction stories, and 3-5 short stories. 

But also I just think it&#039;s a good idea to continue to capture ideas so that when it comes time to choose the next writing project, I have a variety of choices to work with. Part of what slowed me down over the past 10 years (which is really the main period in which I&#039;ve written fiction -- I just wrote a couple of stories in my twenties) is that I&#039;d have one or two story ideas and I&#039;d feel like I needed to complete them before I moved on to anything else. A better method is to interrogate them a bit more before I commit to writing a rough draft.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>When I say ideas, I may or may not mean fully formed story ideas. I count a snippet of a situation, or an image, or a vague memory as an idea. Often ideas will get combined (this happened with the last story I finished and submitted). </p>
<p>And yes, I do need to generate more because I&#8217;m focused on the flash fiction to novella range. If you look at my writing goal for this year, which is 50k words, that&#8217;s going to likely end up being 2-3 novellettes, 3-4 flash fiction stories, and 3-5 short stories. </p>
<p>But also I just think it&#8217;s a good idea to continue to capture ideas so that when it comes time to choose the next writing project, I have a variety of choices to work with. Part of what slowed me down over the past 10 years (which is really the main period in which I&#8217;ve written fiction &#8212; I just wrote a couple of stories in my twenties) is that I&#8217;d have one or two story ideas and I&#8217;d feel like I needed to complete them before I moved on to anything else. A better method is to interrogate them a bit more before I commit to writing a rough draft.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Aspiring authors: you can do this too by Jonathan Langford</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jonathan Langford</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 01 May 2012 21:14:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>By a rare coincidence, I was able today to compare where I am on my novel with where I was a month ago, and it&#039;s about 7,500 words longer. That said, I need to at least double and preferably triple that...

The thing that really astounds me is the &quot;8 ideas a month&quot; part. I&#039;m lucky if I get 2 ideas per year. Maybe that&#039;s why I tend to think in terms of novels (and even multi-novel sets) rather than stories...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>By a rare coincidence, I was able today to compare where I am on my novel with where I was a month ago, and it&#8217;s about 7,500 words longer. That said, I need to at least double and preferably triple that&#8230;</p>
<p>The thing that really astounds me is the &#8220;8 ideas a month&#8221; part. I&#8217;m lucky if I get 2 ideas per year. Maybe that&#8217;s why I tend to think in terms of novels (and even multi-novel sets) rather than stories&#8230;</p>
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		<title>Comment on Thoughts on authorial voice by David Bowles</title>
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		<dc:creator>David Bowles</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 01 May 2012 15:47:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Nice discussion of how voice is influenced by what interests the writer about human existence/interaction.  I think you&#039;re spot on that this, more than specifics of diction and literary devices, is what forms the core of someone&#039;s voice.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Nice discussion of how voice is influenced by what interests the writer about human existence/interaction.  I think you&#8217;re spot on that this, more than specifics of diction and literary devices, is what forms the core of someone&#8217;s voice.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Thoughts on authorial voice by WHM</title>
		<link>http://williamhenrymorris.com/2012/thoughts-on-authorial-voice/#comment-237</link>
		<dc:creator>WHM</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 30 Apr 2012 18:41:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>In a stroke of non-intentional synergy, &lt;a href=&quot;http://www.writingexcuses.com/2012/04/29/writing-excuses-7-18-discovering-your-voice/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;this week&#039;s episode of Writing Excuses&lt;/a&gt; is on &quot;Discovering your voice&quot;.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In a stroke of non-intentional synergy, <a href="http://www.writingexcuses.com/2012/04/29/writing-excuses-7-18-discovering-your-voice/" rel="nofollow">this week&#8217;s episode of Writing Excuses</a> is on &#8220;Discovering your voice&#8221;.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Questioning your story premises by WHM</title>
		<link>http://williamhenrymorris.com/2012/questioning-your-story-premises/#comment-218</link>
		<dc:creator>WHM</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 11 Apr 2012 22:50:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks, Kay. That&#039;s a very helpful way of stating it. 

One of the things I&#039;ve learned lately is that I need to generate many more ideas than I have in the past and then rather than forcing myself to tackle everything that comes down my mental turnpike, figure out what I&#039;m most excited about. Letting your excitement be the gauge and needing that excitement to sustain you really strikes a chord with me.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, Kay. That&#8217;s a very helpful way of stating it. </p>
<p>One of the things I&#8217;ve learned lately is that I need to generate many more ideas than I have in the past and then rather than forcing myself to tackle everything that comes down my mental turnpike, figure out what I&#8217;m most excited about. Letting your excitement be the gauge and needing that excitement to sustain you really strikes a chord with me.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Questioning your story premises by Kay Kenyon</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kay Kenyon</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 11 Apr 2012 17:59:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>To expand on the point I made in my blog: We can&#039;t write the most powerful, coherent story possible without being completely confident of our premise. There are too many side trips that may dilute. So it helps to state your story premise in a concise way, and many authors use a What If statement: What if God&#039;s best angel is cast down from heaven for subversion and vows to rule well in hell? (Paradise Lost) Put together story idea+ character desire so that you define the MC&#039;s quest. Now step back. Does this concisely defined premise still stir you? Is it what you really mean to write? Is it as memorable as you originally thought? Or does this exercise teach you that a deeper story is possible? How do we know when the premise is too complicated? It cannot be briefly told. (Although you may just be stuffing too much into the What if. Get to the heart.) Too thin? Let your own excitement be the gauge. It will sustain you through a year of writing.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>To expand on the point I made in my blog: We can&#8217;t write the most powerful, coherent story possible without being completely confident of our premise. There are too many side trips that may dilute. So it helps to state your story premise in a concise way, and many authors use a What If statement: What if God&#8217;s best angel is cast down from heaven for subversion and vows to rule well in hell? (Paradise Lost) Put together story idea+ character desire so that you define the MC&#8217;s quest. Now step back. Does this concisely defined premise still stir you? Is it what you really mean to write? Is it as memorable as you originally thought? Or does this exercise teach you that a deeper story is possible? How do we know when the premise is too complicated? It cannot be briefly told. (Although you may just be stuffing too much into the What if. Get to the heart.) Too thin? Let your own excitement be the gauge. It will sustain you through a year of writing.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Questioning your story premises by Jonathan Langford</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jonathan Langford</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 10 Apr 2012 01:59:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>A very good question -- especially when you consider that depending on how an idea is developed, the same idea that&#039;s too thin for one writer might be quite sufficient, or even too involved, for a different writer. If you figure out how to tell, please let me know...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A very good question &#8212; especially when you consider that depending on how an idea is developed, the same idea that&#8217;s too thin for one writer might be quite sufficient, or even too involved, for a different writer. If you figure out how to tell, please let me know&#8230;</p>
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		<title>Comment on Context and evaluating secondary world fantasy by WHM</title>
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		<dc:creator>WHM</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 06 Apr 2012 23:36:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Excellent points, Jonathan. I&#039;d be highly interested in how to account for the magical thinking/systems/presences. 

One of the major criticisms of secondary world fantasy has been the lack of diversity of the departing-points. What&#039;s interesting to me is how in the past 10-15 years, authors have reacted to that and broadened the market.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Excellent points, Jonathan. I&#8217;d be highly interested in how to account for the magical thinking/systems/presences. </p>
<p>One of the major criticisms of secondary world fantasy has been the lack of diversity of the departing-points. What&#8217;s interesting to me is how in the past 10-15 years, authors have reacted to that and broadened the market.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Context and evaluating secondary world fantasy by Jonathan Langford</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jonathan Langford</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 06 Apr 2012 21:49:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Almost you make me groan, though all of these are very good points. This is what my academic career would have been about, had I pursued it. There&#039;s an essay I should perhaps send you in which I attempted to tackle critical theories of the fantastic and their inadequacy (as I saw it) as frameworks for dealing with fantasy literature, in which in passing I jabbed at several of your points, particularly #2 above.

Interestingly, I would suggest that important as Tolkien has been in his impact on the reception of fantasy literature, he&#039;s less dominant in terms of its composition and production than we sometimes think, partly because he&#039;s not a true ur-text but rather a fairly late production of an existing tradition. Significant strands of modern fantasy literature lead back through other important sources for their grounding, such as Robert Howard&#039;s Conan books (and their predecessors) and L. Frank Baum&#039;s Oz books (and their predecessors). I&#039;d say that Tolkien&#039;s stature is more like that of Shakespeare in English drama: massive, but not truly foundational. 

Let me briefly suggest that one (or possibly two) vital additional frames that need to be considered are (a) the context of magical thinking underlying the logic of the world (e.g., Ursula Le Guin&#039;s use of the old fantasy trope of words in some original tongue as true names, and names as embodying power), and (b) the non-fantasy world(s) used by the author as template or departing-point of the specific imagined world, as for example the Shire as a calque on 19th century Britain and Rohan as a calque on the culture of Anglo-Saxon verse (as demonstrated by T. A. Shippey), or early 19th century America (including but not limited to the Joseph Smith story) as the template for Card&#039;s Alvin Maker series. 

A final point: Invention or not, it seems to me that inevitably in any standard fantasy story, there&#039;s a context of familiarity that lends a sense of pattern as opposed to patternlessness (your point #3 above, but expanded somewhat to include things like the rooting of magic systems in discredited-but-familiar rules). This is why, despite some apparent affinities, modern fantasy isn&#039;t really well suited to postmodernism. A fantasy-oriented structuralism might catalogue those various underlying ideological and/or historical patterns. As I said earlier, however, that&#039;s the path I decided not to take in my professional life...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Almost you make me groan, though all of these are very good points. This is what my academic career would have been about, had I pursued it. There&#8217;s an essay I should perhaps send you in which I attempted to tackle critical theories of the fantastic and their inadequacy (as I saw it) as frameworks for dealing with fantasy literature, in which in passing I jabbed at several of your points, particularly #2 above.</p>
<p>Interestingly, I would suggest that important as Tolkien has been in his impact on the reception of fantasy literature, he&#8217;s less dominant in terms of its composition and production than we sometimes think, partly because he&#8217;s not a true ur-text but rather a fairly late production of an existing tradition. Significant strands of modern fantasy literature lead back through other important sources for their grounding, such as Robert Howard&#8217;s Conan books (and their predecessors) and L. Frank Baum&#8217;s Oz books (and their predecessors). I&#8217;d say that Tolkien&#8217;s stature is more like that of Shakespeare in English drama: massive, but not truly foundational. </p>
<p>Let me briefly suggest that one (or possibly two) vital additional frames that need to be considered are (a) the context of magical thinking underlying the logic of the world (e.g., Ursula Le Guin&#8217;s use of the old fantasy trope of words in some original tongue as true names, and names as embodying power), and (b) the non-fantasy world(s) used by the author as template or departing-point of the specific imagined world, as for example the Shire as a calque on 19th century Britain and Rohan as a calque on the culture of Anglo-Saxon verse (as demonstrated by T. A. Shippey), or early 19th century America (including but not limited to the Joseph Smith story) as the template for Card&#8217;s Alvin Maker series. </p>
<p>A final point: Invention or not, it seems to me that inevitably in any standard fantasy story, there&#8217;s a context of familiarity that lends a sense of pattern as opposed to patternlessness (your point #3 above, but expanded somewhat to include things like the rooting of magic systems in discredited-but-familiar rules). This is why, despite some apparent affinities, modern fantasy isn&#8217;t really well suited to postmodernism. A fantasy-oriented structuralism might catalogue those various underlying ideological and/or historical patterns. As I said earlier, however, that&#8217;s the path I decided not to take in my professional life&#8230;</p>
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